Plot holes aren’t always dramatic. Sometimes, they’re quiet little cracks that widen over time and make the story fall apart. As a manuscript editor, I see these cracks all the time. They may not scream from the first page, but they show up eventually—confusing the reader, breaking the logic, or ruining the emotional payoff.
The good news? You can fix most plot holes before they make it to the page—or clean them up in revision. Let’s break down five of the most common plot holes I find in manuscripts and how you can fix them.
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1. Characters forget important information
This happens more often than writers realise. A character learns something critical early in the book—then acts later like it never happened.
Example:
In Chapter 3, your protagonist learns their friend is secretly working for the villain. But in Chapter 9, they casually ask this same friend to help them with a secret plan. No mention of the earlier betrayal. The reader remembers. Your character should too.
How to fix it:
Keep a “What They Know and When” tracker. It doesn’t have to be fancy—a simple chart or sticky notes will do. If a character forgets something, there should be a reason: denial, shock, manipulation. Otherwise, it’s a hole.
2. Time doesn’t make sense
When your story’s timeline isn’t clear or consistent, the logic collapses.
Example:
Your character is in Mumbai in the morning and attends a meeting in New York that same afternoon. No jet lag. No travel time. Just… teleportation.
How to fix it:
Create a timeline as you write. Mark dates, time of day, seasons, travel time, and major events. Tools like Aeon Timeline or a basic calendar app can help. Pay attention to how long things should take. If your plot demands speed, show what that speed costs.
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3. Motivations change without cause
Characters don’t just wake up and decide to betray their best friend or give up a lifelong dream. When major decisions lack emotional grounding, readers feel cheated.
Example:
A rebel leader who’s fought for justice for years suddenly joins the corrupt government, and all we get is a line like “I changed my mind.”
How to fix it:
Backtrack. Ask why. What emotional beat, trauma, persuasion, or discovery triggered this shift? If none exists, write it in. A strong internal conflict or external pressure makes even shocking decisions believable.
4. Magic and tech do too much (or too little)
In speculative fiction, systems like magic or advanced tech often serve the plot. But if they’re too flexible or oddly limited, your world loses credibility.
Example:
In one scene, the magic system can bring someone back to life. Later, someone dies and no one uses magic to help—even though it’s never explained why.
How to fix it:
Define your system’s rules early and stick to them. Limitations create tension. Abilities should have a cost, a boundary, or a consequence. If you break your own rules, the story should pause and explain why—through character doubt, failure, or lore.
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5. Loose threads are left hanging
Unresolved subplots, vanished characters, or unanswered questions frustrate readers. Not every detail needs a bow, but the ones that matter must be addressed.
Example:
You introduce a mysterious key in Chapter 5 that seems important. It’s never mentioned again. Did the writer forget? The reader didn’t.
How to fix it:
During revision, make a list of every subplot, symbol, and secondary character. Ask yourself: Is this thread resolved, transformed, or intentionally left open? If not, consider removing it or closing the loop.
Final thoughts
Plot holes are a natural part of writing fiction. They don’t mean your story is bad. They just mean your draft is honest—and now needs shaping.
A great editor won’t just catch the obvious mistakes. They’ll help you untangle the invisible ones. The ones that readers feel even if they can’t explain why. That’s where the magic happens.
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Ready to fix your plot holes?
If you’re unsure where your manuscript needs help—or you’re too close to see the gaps—I can help. As a professional manuscript editor, I work with authors to build stronger, cleaner stories that make sense and connect with readers.
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