Plot Holes, Be Gone! How an Editor Can Help Fill the Gaps in Your Story

December 27 , 2023 Samarpita Mukherjee Sharma
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As a writer, crafting a compelling and seamless story is a challenging endeavor. One common hurdle authors face is the presence of plot holes—those inconsistencies or gaps in the narrative that can leave readers confused or disconnected. But fear not! A manuscript editor can be your trusted ally in identifying and filling these plot holes, ensuring a cohesive and engaging story that captivates your readers from start to finish. In this blog post, we’ll explore the invaluable role of a manuscript editor in addressing plot holes and providing solutions.

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Identifying Plot Holes

Plot holes can be elusive, often escaping the author’s notice during the writing process. This is where a manuscript editor’s trained eye comes in. With their expertise, they meticulously analyze your manuscript to identify any gaps or inconsistencies in the plot. They examine the story’s structure, character arcs, and cause-and-effect relationships, seeking discrepancies that may hinder the narrative flow. By pinpointing these plot holes, a manuscript editor offers invaluable insights that empower authors to strengthen their storytelling.

Analyzing Cause and Effect

One key aspect of filling plot holes is ensuring a logical cause-and-effect progression within your story. A skilled manuscript editor delves deep into your narrative, examining the connections between characters, events, and choices. They evaluate if the consequences of actions are properly established and follow a coherent pattern. By identifying weak cause-and-effect relationships, an editor helps you tighten the plot, making it more believable and immersive for your readers.

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Developing Characters and Motivations

Inconsistent character motivations can often lead to plot holes. A manuscript editor helps you delve into the minds of your characters, ensuring their actions align with their personalities and motivations. They meticulously examine character arcs, seeking opportunities to deepen their development and eliminate any conflicting behaviors or unrealistic choices. Through this process, an editor ensures that your characters’ actions and decisions are authentic and contribute meaningfully to the story’s progression, bridging potential plot holes along the way.

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Bridging Narrative Gaps

When it comes to plot holes, sometimes the missing pieces lie in the gaps between scenes or chapters. A manuscript editor analyzes the transitions between story elements, ensuring a smooth and seamless narrative flow. They scrutinize the pacing, evaluating if there are any abrupt shifts or missing information that could confuse readers. By bridging these narrative gaps, an editor helps maintain the reader’s engagement, enabling them to stay immersed in your story without any jarring interruptions.

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Providing Solutions

A manuscript editor doesn’t just identify plot holes; they also provide practical solutions to fill them. They collaborate closely with authors, brainstorming ideas and offering suggestions that align with the story’s themes and vision. Whether it’s restructuring scenes, introducing additional backstory, or reworking character motivations, an editor works hand-in-hand with you to address plot holes effectively. Their objective viewpoint and expert storytelling knowledge can breathe new life into your manuscript, transforming it into a coherent and satisfying reading experience.

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Plot holes can undermine the impact of even the most well-crafted stories. However, with the guidance of a manuscript editor, you can confidently tackle these gaps and ensure a compelling narrative that captivates your readers. From identifying plot holes to bridging gaps and providing solutions, a manuscript editor offers invaluable support in refining your storytelling. Embrace their expertise, and together, you can create a cohesive and immersive journey that will leave readers eagerly turning pages until the very end.

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If you are looking for an excellent manuscript editor, someone to create content for your business, or an expert to help build your personal or professional brand on social media, then look no further and connect with me at editor@samarpita.in I can be followed on instagram at @samarpita and on twitter at @samarpitadotin.

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Read my ebook WRITE. EDIT. PROMOTE. to learn the basics about becoming an author – from writing your own book, to editing your first draft, and to promoting your book yourself! You can also read my ebook How To Write A Story Effectively and learn some valuable lessons about how a story can go from average to extraordinary. This book is part 1 of the series.

In fiction, I have two short stories for children in an ebook called Bedtime Stories.

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Thorns in the Crown by Tanushree Podder | Book Review

December 16 , 2023 Samarpita Mukherjee Sharma
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Part 1 of Thorns In The Crown begins in 1924-35 where we learn about our protagonists. Set in British occupied India when the freedom movement was taking shape and the political air in the country was quite wild. If historical fiction fascinates you, then you are going to sucked right into the lives of Olivia, Neel, and Peter.

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One Bengali, one British, one anglo-Indian bastard – what do they have in common in this story with the backdrop of India’s struggle for freedom and constant dissatisfaction with the British rule.

We have Neel, a young Bengali boy growing up in a family with activists and revolutionaries. We have a white girl Olivia born on the night Indians had come to hate, and her own life showed the effects as if it was cursed. And we have Peter, an anglo-Indian bastard child abandoned by his father and his family after his mother’s death. While Neel is an active revolutionary involved from a pretty young age, Olivia is a silent observer from outside being drawn to the freedom movement, and there is Peter, the outcast who was neither accepted by the Brits nor the Indians, and hated both the same.

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In Part 1 of the book, we understand the characters and watch them grown up towards their own paths in life. Part 2 is from 1936-44 when the freedom movement picked course and everybody’s lives were uprooted and changed. We also have young widow Devyani who had thrown herself to the works of the freedom movement trying to continue the job her late husband was trying to do. The narrative has us moving from Punjab to Webs Bengal and to the Andamans.

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I am a historical fiction enthusiast and truly enjoyed this story. What was a bonus for me was to get a peak into the lives or a British child growing up in British occupied India and an anglo-Indian bastard who loses his mother, then gets converted and then tries to survive in a country that is flighting for itself, while he doesn’t relate to the oppressor or the oppressed. I also loved the character development Olivia got.

We have grown up reading about the freedom movement and all historical details are ingrained in hearts and brains of most of us. But what about common people who also took part in the struggle or chose to stay out? What was it like growing up in India of today, as an Indian, as an unloved British child, and as an abandoned anglo-Indian bastard?

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In Thorns In The Crown, author Tanushree Podder weaves a beautiful story around India’s struggle for freedom taking us into lives of the youth at that time.

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Blurb:

Indraneel, the son of a schoolteacher and brother to activists, has felt the call to revolution ever since he was a young boy. His life’s mission is clear-to free India from its oppressors.

Olivia, the daughter of a ruthless British officer, has spent most of her lonely life tucked away in cantonments. But as she comes of age, she finds herself unable to resist the pull of the people and customs of India-the only home she’s ever known.

Peter is an opportunistic Anglo-Indian orphan torn between his two selves, pledging allegiance to neither, until a chance encounter with revolutionaries changes the course of his life forever.

As the fires of revolution are lit across India, we follow these three lives along the length and breadth of the country-from Amritsar to Calcutta and onwards to Ross Island in the Andamans. Thorns in the Crown tells a story of belonging and courage against the backdrop of India’s struggle for independence and the emergence of a new social order.

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If you are looking for an excellent manuscript editor, someone to create content for your business, or an expert to help build your personal or professional brand on social media, then look no further and connect with me at editor@samarpita.in I can be followed on instagram at @samarpita and on twitter at @samarpitadotin.

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Read my ebook WRITE. EDIT. PROMOTE. to learn the basics about becoming an author – from writing your own book, to editing your first draft, and to promoting your book yourself! You can also read my ebook How To Write A Story Effectively and learn some valuable lessons about how a story can go from average to extraordinary. This book is part 1 of the series.

In fiction, I have two short stories for children in an ebook called Bedtime Stories.

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