Writing is an art, and like all arts, it requires continuous improvement. Whether you are writing a novel, a blog post, or a business proposal, choosing the right words is essential to communicate your message effectively. Verbs play a crucial role in your writing because they express action and give your sentences the energy they need to convey meaning. However, not all verbs are created equal. Some are overused, vague, or lack precision. To upgrade your writing, you need to choose your verbs wisely. In this blog post, we’ll focus on ten verbs starting with B and their better alternatives.
Begin
Begin is a vague verb that doesn’t convey much information. Instead, consider using a more specific verb such as launch, initiate, or commence. These verbs provide a clearer picture of the action taking place.
Example: Instead of “She began the project,” try “She launched the project with a kickoff meeting.”
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Believe
Believe is another verb that lacks specificity. When expressing belief, consider using trust, rely, or have faith in to convey a stronger conviction.
Example: Instead of “I believe she will show up on time,” try “I trust she will arrive promptly.”
Bring
Bring is a basic verb that doesn’t offer much detail. To describe the movement of an object, consider using carry, transport, or convey.
Example: Instead of “He brought the package to my door,” try “He carried the package to my doorstep.”
Break
Break is a common verb that can be replaced with more precise alternatives. Instead of break, use shatter, smash, or crack to describe a specific type of damage.
Example: Instead of “The vase broke when it fell off the table,” try “The vase shattered into a million pieces when it hit the floor.”
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Build
Build is a general verb that doesn’t convey much detail. Instead, use construct, erect, or assemble to describe the act of building something.
Example: Instead of “We are building a new house,” try “We are constructing a new home on the hill.”
Buy
Buy is a straightforward verb that lacks nuance. Instead of buy, use purchase, acquire, or procure to describe the act of obtaining something.
Example: Instead of “I bought a new car,” try “I acquired a new vehicle for my daily commute.”
Breakdown
Breakdown is a verb that describes a failure or malfunction. However, it’s not very descriptive. Use malfunction, collapse, or crash instead to provide a more accurate description of what happened.
Example: Instead of “The car broke down on the side of the road,” try “The car experienced a sudden malfunction and came to a halt.”
Become
Instead of using become, try using transform into, evolve into, or turn into to create a more powerful image.
Example: The caterpillar became a butterfly. Better alternative: The caterpillar transformed into a butterfly.
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Be
Instead of using be, try using more descriptive verbs such as appear, seem, or look to make your writing more interesting.
Example: She was angry. Better alternative: She appeared to be angry.
Balance
Instead of using balance, try harmony, equilibrium. or perhaps stability or equanimity which emphasize a sense of calm and composure.
Example: Achieving harmony between work and leisure time is essential for overall well-being.
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